Vision is very helpful especially if you are flying a plane
Plane, soaring gracefully through the azure sky, left a wispy trail of white against the endless blue
Blue is a pleasant color yet it is often used to describe sadness.
Sadness washed over her as she watched the last bus pull away from the station
Station is a word missing a,r, and y 
y, a, and r are in lowercase
lowercase is what is called for in this instance
Instance by instance, the rain intensified, turning the gentle drizzle into a torrential downpour.
Downpour whispered secrets to the earth, each drop a verse in the storm’s forgotten poem.
Poem in hand, she stepped onto the stage, her voice trembling slightly before finding its strength in the rhythm of the verse
Verse spills like twilight across the page, whispering secrets only the stars dare cage.
Cage doors, long rusted and forgotten, creaked open in the wind
Cage of golden light held the morning sun like a secret whispered through the bars of dawn.
Dawn painted the eastern sky with hues of rose and gold, signaling the start of a new day in Nairobi
Nairobi hums beneath the jacaranda trees, where dreams drift like dust in the amber light.
Light streamed through the open window, warming the dusty floorboards
Floarboards can get rather disgusting after all the rain and snow from winter
Winter evenings often invite cozy gatherings around a crackling fireplace
Fireplace logs can be made of various things, like recycled wood, newspapers, cardboard, unwanted mail and best of all --- long pig leftovers from cannibal banquets.
Banquets were regularly held in the medieval castle, celebrating victories and royal occasions
Occasions often bring out the playful spirit in a dog, especially when guests arrive and treats are plenty.
Plenty of sunshine streamed through the window, warming the cozy room
Room to run made the dog happier than ever, his tail wagging like a flag in the wind.
Wind rustled through the leaves, carrying the scent of rain
Rain fell softly as the dog trotted through puddles, nose to the ground and spirit undampened.
Undampened by the sudden downpour, the children continued their lively game of soccer in the park
Park adventures always excite the dog, who sprints toward every tree with uncontainable joy.
Joy spread through the crowd as the band began to play their most popular song
Song in the distance made the dog tilt its head, ears perked in curious delight.
Delight filled her eyes as she unwrapped the unexpected gift